"George Dance" <georgedance04@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> wrote in message
news:1193776286.165693.105820@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> April
>
> Sky a cold shower,
> all the ground yellow-green;
> the kindest month.
>
>
> -
>
>
> May
>
> Bright flowers crawl
> from torn chrysali,
> dry and blow away.
>
> -
>
> June
>
> How like a tree
> to strew its blossoms
> over my flowerbed!
>
>
-George, I think all your tercets so far are interesting, but I really
love the June one. While it's a charming and humorous June
picture taken straightforwardly, it's also open to many
interpretations. For instance, I can't help but see it from a feminist
viewpoint. Others may read it very differently. Keep on!
Lark
