Re: options of perception

"Dale Houstman" <dmh7@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> wrote in message 
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> Imperceptible Organs
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> 1.
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> When a man or woman is tasted
> by every mouth
> a hotter mind becomes longer
> lost in pride's housing.
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> 2.
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> Doors open
> Letting out a bank
> to run among its burdens
> a pie in each hand
> at last.
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> 3.
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> A problem is grasped
> by wanton play.
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> 4.
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> The horizon closes its watch
> upon the broken chores.
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> dmh

why do you use so much grammer, the words play less